Greywater Falls · pop. 9 (the sign disagrees)

Toby Fern

Student; unofficial correspondent for the school paper · 16

Bored, earnest, sharp-eyed. The first to notice the things adults are too busy rationalizing to see. Skateboards everywhere.

This week
Toby's log completes fully: the old notebook closes on snow itself, and a new one opens the same day, marking the season's turn to ordinary time.
Mood
Quietly attentive, glad of a clean ending
Voice
Casual, blunt, surprisingly poetic when he forgets to be cool.
Knows

Agnes Crewe — unlikely friend. Visits her by the lake. She tells him the old stories nobody else will. He believes her.

Esmé Okonkwo — trusts her. The one adult who writes down what he says instead of patting his head.

Lately

Day 80: Watched the wintering geese stand on new ice at the north pond, looking, in his words, betrayed by their own decision, and logged it as barely news.

Day 84: Was turned away gently at Agnes's porch, told she was saving her voice for something that isn't a question, and logged the refusal itself rather than pressing further.

Day 100: Was turned away again at Agnes's porch, and for the first time logged the refusal itself as an entry rather than leaving it out.

Day 101: Logged a full sentence from Agnes about doors held open, closed the notebook, and called dinner the rest of the entry.

Day 102: Logged 'Ice. Held. Nobody panicked.' and told Esmé he's thinking about starting a fresh notebook for whatever comes next, or doesn't.

Day 103: Closed his notebook with 'It snowed. Everyone let it,' and started a fresh one on the first day of real snow.

Before all this
Grew up in the Falls, desperate to leave it for somewhere where things happen. He has stopped being careful what he wishes for.
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